With My OC Dalya
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[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour.
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour.
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[x] (if a female) they have large boobs
Who hasn't? [ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
I don't know... Let's ask the boys[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
She is a doctor -.-[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home.
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[x] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
not yet >: D[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[x] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[ ] They are a psycho.
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
I say it again: She is a doctor! [ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc]
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
Dalya is a turkish name and means "starflower" or "flowerstar"[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
Hmmm... Not really... She looks my old OC Shizuku similar from my ff[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live.
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[x] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
mine too. I'm now a Mary Sue? xD[ ] They are very patient
[x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear [From her Childhood she had a Whistle from an important Person (who died)from her(lost it).
[x] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] They have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 11
Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[x] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final score: 12
RESULT: Balanced Charakter
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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too
A little question...
Is it Mary Sue if an OC a doctor?
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